Following the feedback that my fellow group member, Ben received. Through my own independent views i knew that my video could be improved on certain aspects. Bens audience feedback backed up my idea to create a second rough cut as i knew things could be changed on my original rough cut as well as on his.
Therefore, for my second rough cut i aimed to cut down the length of my shots and use relevant effects referring to a pirate theme to link in with the song lyrics. Also i aimed to have more continuity in my editing so the film would run smoothly form each shot.
Audience Feedback (Rough Cut 2)
- The flashing effect was over used
- Diegetic sound needed to be taken off the original clips
- Callidescope pattern effect was in-effective
- The slow motion effect was over used apparently
- The swinging on the ropes shots were used excessively
From my audience feedback i gained no positive feedback, as this is a second rough cut if i were to consider a third, i am aware of the things that could be improved on my mini-vid.
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